First Draft and Feedback

The First Draft Of Our Music Video

This is the first draft of our music video - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qWu2BZWyLcY



We got some audience feedback from the video, to see what we could improve and what we could keep the same.

Although some of the feedback said the titles looked nice, they also agreed it wasn't something that would be typically be in a music video, and would more likely be in a movie. If the music video was intended to be like a short movie, like the music video for Black Magic by Little Mix for example, then it would have fit. Unfortunately this was no intended and so we took it out.



The 'movie' titles in Black Magic

We decided to change it to small titles in the corner of the screen, instead of being big and obvious like before. We also put the artist name and song name together instead of separately, like most music videos do when showing the name and artist on music channels.

Similarly, feedback told us that the credits at the end of the music video was more typical for a music video that was based on a movie. We decided to take it out fully.